Monday, December 23, 2013

Allison...... [a Young Poemhunter Friend; Giggle-Girl; Personal] Comments

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Goldheart Bird is this youngster’s lovely poetic-online-name,
but someday she may be better known for her violin-playing fame.
Right now I tease her, a little bit, about her “poor”.... spelling,
but she may scoff at me, judiciously, when her career does get gelling.
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Bri Edwards 23 December 2013

OOPS! i just edited the poem. i knew i should have checked my facts before submitting it! my first submission had dog and dogs, whereas my edited version should soon appear with bird and birds. maybe i was thrown off because in her poem When i think of you she mentions furry instead of feathery. so my quick fix was just changing the two words (see above) . thank goodness! :)

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