Alliance Comments

So rich and beautiful in its brevity.thanks for sharing.

The unknown Gardener will settle everything.

It is poignant indeed but sometimes the debt cannot be settled.

And leaving out allows another to enter.. iip

the contempt of silence, what's more hurtful than that.. beautiful dedication to your unknown gardner...

moving and so much in few lines, Ann

Rachel, I feel the sadness and bewiderment that a shunned heart must endue.

Trigger a good thought by this lines...nice penned Rachel_Unwritten Soul

Was this because of a death?

beautiful verse, loved reading it.

Mutual Benefit Sweet Ann, feel my touch burn Sweet Ann, part your lips in awe Sweet Ann, understand and know this depth in my concern your sorrow hasn’t enough coal dust. © RH Peat 1/21/2012 10: 35pm Form stichic/ 5 lines In Response: Rachel Ann Butler, hugs and kisses Response to; Alliance