Thursday, October 6, 2011

Alley Cricket Comments

Rating: 4.0

Thompson took the crease;
with broken pallet plank in hand,
tapped at the cracked concrete.
Smith bowled, right arm over dustbin
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Graham Thompson 01 November 2012

Great story-as-poem. Life is a game of cricket. But surely the grammar demands (and the sound too) that the last line should be: Not knowing who they were to be?

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