Sunday, February 18, 2018

Alleviated My Overwhelming Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kept away, day to day distracted
You're my miracle, so stayed
Whenever I fear today
I look back at past
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Doris Cornago
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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 February 2018

Doris, such a comforting poem...10++++

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deborrahcornago 19 February 2018

Hi Bernard, thank you for appreciating. This was intended for Valentine's Day, to comfort those who cannot physically be with their significant other but who are with them, too, in a manner which is most comforting.

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Doris 18 February 2018

I meant, go on forever. This is really crux of life, its temporal quality. We fear that when we enjoy a thing, it will be taken away frrom us and so, we hold back for the ‘right time' which never comes. So, why not throw all caution to the wind and see where the canoe takes us?

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