Friday, August 21, 2020

Allan's Happy Ending Comments

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Allan leaned back in his chair as he munched
on a piece of bread at the small cafe,
he daydreamed idly as he sat there,
his wife Janet was again running late.
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Douglas Scotney 21 August 2020

enjoyed that read......

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Susan Williams 21 August 2020

I am glad to hear this is a fictional story- there was enough details that I thought this might be your wife. The story had so many small details- the wife munching bread for example- the children going through the angst of their teenage years... I love the short story poem style and the closure, 10

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