Thursday, October 20, 2011

Allah! You Are My Everything.. Comments

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you are my guide,
when i m lost.

you are my smile,
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Arfa Iris
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 November 2011

i like it....nice poem.

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Free Bird 24 October 2011

this poem shows that God is everywhere and he always help us.Great poem.keep it doing..............

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2011

God is always make us happy, lead us back to the right path, reason to struggle...Always there when nobody stand behind, the One and no replace.. Almighty make everything calm in me too...Nice write :) _Unwritten Soul

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Sayeed Abubakar 22 October 2011

It's good. I like it.

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Jo George 21 October 2011

I t sounds like a prayer, everybody is indebted to AlMighty for all the blessings he is showering on us and You have narrated it in simple but beautiful words. well done poetess. May God Bless You.

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Jacqui Broad 20 October 2011

Oh, it's spoken from the heart! You've word my silent prayer, because sometimes you just can't say it out loud. Beautiful, Allah is that and plenty more...

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Harindhar Reddy 20 October 2011

Yikes! Yes mighty almighty is the one who drives our soul - a ship. oh, Cripes! Your words may sound small yet the meaning it carries shows your reinvigorate strength hidden in you. Holy smoke! A good solemn hymn to good by you Bon Voyage to the poet in her journey........Simply this poem pulls the string of any heart..............Cripes! Gordon Bennett, It's marvelous job.......

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