Saturday, July 6, 2019

Alladin's Mantra Comments

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Alladin's Mantra

I was sitting alone
In a high walled prison
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Bharati Nayak
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M. Asim Nehal 28 September 2023

Faith and self belief are the two most powerful tools in our possession, how we use it is left to us only. Nice poem. I am sure the walls were artificial created by the mind.... Bri should not be worried about Jumping or Running now.....

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Bri Edwards 28 September 2023

'You mentioned 'jumping over' the walls, but switched to 'running through them'. Hmm? Are you sure 'I/me' didn't end up burrowing UNDER the walls? ?

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Bharati Nayak 02 October 2023

Thank you Bri for your comments for which I am revisiting the poem after a long time.Very often we create walls around us and afraid to jump the walls.We have to do away with those mental blocks that hinder us and then only we can progress.

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Bri Edwards 28 September 2023

I think I saw part of only 1 Harry Potter movie. I laughed [[ silently ]] when I read this, which I don't believe I saw on a screen: 'And then run like Harry Potter Through the walls.'

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

Sitting alone! ! Muse, Fuse, Sprituality! ! ! ! To conquer the unconquerable. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 September 2019

He told me to become energy And move round the whole universe And then I can reach my God in seconds. beautiful thoughts. remembering now the thoughts of Einstein.. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 September 2019

how to Conquer the unconquerable And jump the high walls. He told me to gather energy in myself And then run like Harry Potter Through the walls. great imagination dear Bharati.. thank u. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 18 August 2019

Matter may be converted into energy, we may also be converted into energy but the question remains what we shall carry with us and what we shall leave on the earth. a nice spiritual poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 August 2019

Mantras are powerful. They are even more powerful than Alladin's lamp and Harry Potter put together. They not only make you powerful and confident, they also guide you through a sublime spiritual path. Thank you so much, dear Bharati. I feel full of energy reading your beautiful poem........10

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Savita Tyagi 30 July 2019

That is a powerful Mantra. Be the energy. Believe in yourself. Thanks Bharthi.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2019

He told me to become energy And move round the whole universe And then I can reach my God in seconds.......feeling of God's spirit is well described, Beautiful spiritual poem is amazingly shared. Thanks.

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Sekharan Pookkat 07 July 2019

Power of mind is not poor but to realize it is hard

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2019

Thank you so much Sekharan Pookkat for your nice comment. We have tremendous energy inside.But we often fail to see that energy and so languish in dark cell.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 July 2019

So true and to the point: Thoughts of mind can't be confined by a prison, nor energies of the soul that can move all heaven. Call it Alladin's mantra, call it an occult tantra. Lovely piece.

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2019

My humble thanks Anirudddha Pathak ji for your kind read and valuable feedback.Yes, our mind is very powerful.Our thoughts can not be confined in prison and the energy of soul can move all heaven.

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Jane Campion 07 July 2019

Wonderful imaginative poem. Just like Poetry should be.

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Bharati Nayak 07 July 2019

Thank you Jane Campion for your encouraging comment.

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