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hey paul! just a little thing here.... Its called being very angry at someone and writing a rather nasty little poem about them. You should try it some time. Very... interesting.

Jessica, Do not write with such profanity.......... The best messages in poetry are done with clever use of the language. Profanity does not lend itself to most readers. All the same this was a nice piece of writing. Just trying to help.