Friday, June 13, 2008
All Yor Pearls Comments
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I can see your sympathy
You wear it like a string of fake pearls
Hanging on yor ears
As you pretend to listen
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7/28/2025 8:19:51 PM # 1.0.0
You have made good use of your metaphor, Chelsea. Your word 'fake' let's the reader know exactly what that sympathy is made of...your verb, 'pretend' carries the metaphor farthe (although I urge you to find a substitute for the second 'pretend.' This little poem has all it needs to be a real gem. Good work. Raynette.