All, Where, Some Comments
All where some
long since gone
the sun of happiness
did'nt even shone
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yeah really nice poetic impulses great write +10 regards anjali
suggesion: shine in the place of shone; has killed to have killed, even born to even being born, to ripped to to be ripped.You may get poems given language correction before being published. you have a nack of poetical expression. carry onshanmugam
an aching heart that touches my spirit, tearing apart my wandering soul........well penned.
the tumultuous twists of life well expressed here definitely touches the soul
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7/18/2025 10:57:17 AM # 1.0.0
Strong sputtering feelings. Words in tune with emotions...very well written....10