light enlightens gallows of darkness
truth is stark reality by flow idyll
we do exist today by non-existence tomorrow
iffy dream lays back to happen by desire
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Yes! time is a great healer of milling sorrows and pain is no pain by endurance.Every thing is ephemerous in this world, even the life itself is an ephemera. No thing is forever except the divine beauty. A beautiful piece of poetry with consolatory effects.
A beautiful poem. Very true. We should live the life. This poem is a great reminder. A very good piece.
Beautiful poem. Life is so short and we should try to live it in a compassionate way. Thanks for sharing!
when we feel pain has to be endured how about pleasure? ...wonderful poem sequencing events...great imagery Dr
time is a gret healer..... lovely poem and nice phrase used to compose it. i really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing your beautiful insight with all.
A rich metaphorical experience. The mood is captivating, the imagery very memorable. Ten for your eloquent pen, Dr. Kar. Warm regards, Sandra
Beautiful poem, profound and enduring. Life and existence evoked in unmistable terms.
It reminds me of Shakespeare's famous lines coming in Henry IV - Thought's the slave of life, Life's time's fool and Time that takes survey of all must have an end! Indeed Time absorbs everything in this world! If good things happen time will be appreciated; but only bad things happen one will say as Shakespeare has said!
again, great write Dr. Kar...your piece is an inspiration to anybody....in this very challenging world where trials, pains are like clouds that covers happiness..true to your poem...time is great healer of milling sorrows...(happiness just awaits ahead.after ephemeral pain) ..10++++++++
the juxtaposition of dynamic metaphors enhance a profound philosophical poem, 10+ though I disagree with your conclusions
All's well and nothin' left to compare. Musing.........
Resplendent imagework, highlights this soothing poetic rendering....Stanzaec structure is virtually metre-flawless...Lines glide like autumn breeze...Solid Work, as per uaual, Doctor. fjr
time is a great healer of milling sorrows jasmine awaits night to diffuse its muse --- such a beautiful lines, very uplifting tone and a calm mood in this theme...a 10! ! !
The storms of life may come an' go, (now an' then) - But life's beauty divine - Always comes 'back again'! Lovely poem Dr. Kar ! *10*! ! Friend Thad
time is a great healer of milling sorrows jasmine awaits night to diffuse its muse never yet stops its fragrance slogging to clouds pain is no pain by endurance, thy beauty divine - - - - - - Exquisitely beautiful lines - - -Pain is no pain as it melts away by beauty divine.Congratulations for such a lovely poem.