Tuesday, November 11, 2008

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light enlightens gallows of darkness
truth is stark reality by flow idyll
we do exist today by non-existence tomorrow
iffy dream lays back to happen by desire
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Dr subhendu kar
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Bharati Nayak 13 December 2017

time is a great healer of milling sorrows jasmine awaits night to diffuse its muse never yet stops its fragrance slogging to clouds pain is no pain by endurance, thy beauty divine - - - - - - Exquisitely beautiful lines - - -Pain is no pain as it melts away by beauty divine.Congratulations for such a lovely poem.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 24 November 2008

IN ALL ITS DIVINITY.... BEAUTIFUL...! ! ! :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 November 2008

Yes! time is a great healer of milling sorrows and pain is no pain by endurance.Every thing is ephemerous in this world, even the life itself is an ephemera. No thing is forever except the divine beauty. A beautiful piece of poetry with consolatory effects.

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Mary Das 19 November 2008

A beautiful poem. Very true. We should live the life. This poem is a great reminder. A very good piece.

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Lynne Howard 18 November 2008

Beautiful poem. Life is so short and we should try to live it in a compassionate way. Thanks for sharing!

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rajagopal h 16 November 2008

when we feel pain has to be endured how about pleasure? ...wonderful poem sequencing events...great imagery Dr

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Seema Chowdhury 15 November 2008

time is a gret healer..... lovely poem and nice phrase used to compose it. i really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing your beautiful insight with all.

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Sandra Fowler 15 November 2008

A rich metaphorical experience. The mood is captivating, the imagery very memorable. Ten for your eloquent pen, Dr. Kar. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rani Turton 15 November 2008

Beautiful poem, profound and enduring. Life and existence evoked in unmistable terms.

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Ramesh T A 15 November 2008

It reminds me of Shakespeare's famous lines coming in Henry IV - Thought's the slave of life, Life's time's fool and Time that takes survey of all must have an end! Indeed Time absorbs everything in this world! If good things happen time will be appreciated; but only bad things happen one will say as Shakespeare has said!

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 November 2008

again, great write Dr. Kar...your piece is an inspiration to anybody....in this very challenging world where trials, pains are like clouds that covers happiness..true to your poem...time is great healer of milling sorrows...(happiness just awaits ahead.after ephemeral pain) ..10++++++++

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Shimon Weinroth 14 November 2008

the juxtaposition of dynamic metaphors enhance a profound philosophical poem, 10+ though I disagree with your conclusions

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Ency Bearis 14 November 2008

amazing write..well done..thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 November 2008

All's well and nothin' left to compare. Musing.........

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

Beautiful soothing poem, well penned by you, 10 Lynda xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 November 2008

Resplendent imagework, highlights this soothing poetic rendering....Stanzaec structure is virtually metre-flawless...Lines glide like autumn breeze...Solid Work, as per uaual, Doctor. fjr

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C T Heart 12 November 2008

time is a great healer of milling sorrows jasmine awaits night to diffuse its muse --- such a beautiful lines, very uplifting tone and a calm mood in this theme...a 10! ! !

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Thad Wilk 11 November 2008

The storms of life may come an' go, (now an' then) - But life's beauty divine - Always comes 'back again'! Lovely poem Dr. Kar ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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