All Under A Sky Of Stars Comments
Stading under the sky
into night's hug
watching the twinkling lights
The wind plays with her fairy hair
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As a child was his behavior but his heart older than universe together time was a poetic verse The most human of all but he was something else A traveler, an artist, an Alien A great poem narrating romance between alien beings and residents but not hearts...it captures the mind of any reader instantly. Thanks for the notes too. 10+++++ Congrats Marina for the poem being picked today, as POD. Subhas
Muse, fuse! Under the sky! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wonderful narration of a story of man and woman as a fairy tale!
A love story whether real or just an imagination is always attractive to the listeners. Aliens came in this world and left their children on the earth. Many races, like Japanese, claim that they are the sons of God. It's a beautiful poem and a very well selection as members' poem of the day. Congrats.
a wonderful imaginative poem about what is the meaning of true love which by the way is really one of the last things that IS free in our greedy and mostly loveless times? .........well written Marina
Marina, such an inspiring ang lovely poem worthy to be chosen... a huge 10+++
Wow, what a heartfelt journey of two souls so close to an elusive everlasting love, yet so incapable of embodying that fairytale-like romance. A gripping poem that tells an age old love story in an exceptionally unique way. Congrats on poem of the day, well desereved
Oh! this is so fantastic and scripted so beautifully telling through story true love rarely to be found today is really very touching and at the same time hopeful of finding one such real love at some point of time........definitely deserves P.O.D.........thanks for sharing......10+++++++++++
Such a noble thought about love expressed in the Poet's Notes as well as through the captivating narrative of the poem. But as the poet says there is always a quest and hope for true love in life. Thanks and Congrats. He was an Allien / She was a Human The tale ended / without happy endings In a world without love / earth is so thirsty of true love
The poem is not bad but frankly I hate the promulgation of the false Alien narrative being pushed on mass public & which they are so ready to believe.
Thank you Bernard! ! ! You can not imagine how much it means for me this! ! Thank you
There lies hope, there lies my fairy tale... Exquisitely penned poet. Cant wait to read more from you...You may re-write the ending so the Alien and the Girl end up together forever..stranger things have happened..
My Dear Loza if i could give you a present to thank you for your beautiful words i would give you a star! ! Realy! ! ! Thank you so much for the advise too! ! ! Maybe in another poem the alien finds the girl and be together! ! ! !
Love with twinkle stars is wonderfully felt standing under this beautiful sky. Very well penned poem this is...10
Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul! ! ! Every comment that comes from my poetry siblings makes me happy and gives me the strenth to continue! ! !
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7/27/2025 7:04:59 PM # 1.0.0
Marvellous poem. Beautifully written, captivating. The melancholy feeling permeates to the hearts of the reader.