Saturday, February 7, 2009

All U Want From Me Rite? ? 333 *i Loved U With All My Hart* I Thought U Wouldnt Break Me 'That Was So Stooopid Of Me' Comments

Rating: 3.4

I believed in this conception
That i could be your one and only
That vision has gone down the drain
Dont cha think? ? ?
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Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl
COMMENTS
james Xane 26 February 2009

Not quite the poetic language, but surely shows the pain you've put in the poem. Loved this peice as I'm a sad writer as well, keep it on.

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Tom Golding 08 February 2009

You are a serious poet with something serious to say worth looking at. You should watch the language to be taken seriously. Well done!

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Pilar Killen 08 February 2009

amazing love this one =D

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Keith Hendrickson 07 February 2009

wow i expected it to be more af a joke cause of your bio and you name..lol.. but man are you talented. i guess dont judge a book by its cover...very very good piece

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Kerli Undead 07 February 2009

your 'advanced' vocab, makes the peoms more unique, like your style. ~Kerli

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Eyan Desir 07 February 2009

interestin, its a good poem

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*Innocent Angel* 07 February 2009

Nice poem..I liked the wors you used..maybe cuz i never heard of soemone of them..but Nice poem

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