All Trains Stop Here Comments

Unique approach to the subject of death as I eat my non-cholesteral eggs...

I love that station where the sojourn stops forever.................hoots no more and the locomotive relaxed, Hasmukh indeed a great poem.

Life's journey and end has been beautifully portrayed. Pl. read my poem GIFT OF LIFE in the PH.

brilliant, ..the ending is powerful...Good write

Excellent writing...everything must come to an end..we are visitors..I love the title 'All trains stop here'

We must do our best in the short period of time available to us......if we can feel we are responsible......

Lucky ones may have orderly end - i think that was how you put it; you give many indications of the surprise that death can all too often bring, kind of like a panther springing out at you. yes, it happens all too often, i can only keep my fingers crossed for myself. there seems little generality in the way of what and how death brings about the in the phenomena of our end. not something for young minds to contemplate on - or is it? excellent imaging here.

Death is an inexhastible subject. You provide us a new aspect and much for our meditation. I just finished 'Love Lives on with Memories'. It also considers life and death. Take a look.

I survived...God at play...living a better and different life each and everyday... A new life is not new if you can; t make it better...good write...

Hasmukh, my staff is leaning on the wall to my left. Your poem brings it within my reach Life is a thread so thin for my birds to shread.. Loving life makes loving the after life such fun. My thoughts of life are my dogs and my wives who caught my attention when they vied for my attention. Who will give me sorrow? Those who never believed that life is for those who are the believers.

A write full of insight.

Very essence of things and philosophy, Al leave for abode to collect trophy, ................life comes to anaend at this junction.. it is worthy poem...10

Hasmukh I had a heart attack on my 40th birthday and I can assure you it changes the way you live your life if you surrive. You have a very different set of ideas.

All trains come to an abrupt halt, We call it cardiac arrest or heart stop, ..............as it is mainjunction for life....10

all trains stop at life junction....10

trains has to stop somewhre and life is place for it....10

halting junction for life....10

all trains stop at life junction...10

life come to stand still here....10

life is referred to here as main junction....10