Saturday, April 2, 2016

All Through The Darkness Comments

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ALL THROUGH THE DARKNESS
When problems come to our life,
We should be as sharp as knife,
To cut the problems in our life.
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shrutika kahale
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Smitesh Gavande 13 July 2016

Lovely poem shrutika..

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Shrutika Kahale 09 May 2017

thankyou so much smith. love you

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Smitesh Gavande 13 July 2016

Tom Billsborough ..she is 16

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Shrutika Kahale 09 May 2017

yup....smith

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

All these things can happen to me and you! Thanks for sharing.

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Shrutika Kahale 06 May 2016

yes, thankyou for commenting

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Tom Billsborough 25 April 2016

I don't know how old you are but you have a maturity of vision. Judging by your notes, you had been in a dark vale. But you have a true spirit to overcome pain and difficulties. Tom Billsborough

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Shrutika Kahale 26 April 2016

i am 15

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Akhil Raveendran 23 April 2016

all special creation born from pain.. you cast your self to over come pain but don't want to show any one about your problem and pain.. because our problem is ours.. we can overcome easily.. i can understand easily.. about you.. i find some similarity.. our mind.

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Shrutika Kahale 23 April 2016

true, we cast ourselves to overcome pain but dont want to show it to anyone, for me its because i feel it makes me weak which i dont want to be

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Sahil Gupta 22 April 2016

Such a poem at such a young age.. well done.. Hope to see more poems from you👍

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Shrutika Kahale 23 April 2016

thankyou so much, aand yes will keep writing

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Sahil Gupta 22 April 2016

Such a poem at such a young age.. well done.. Hope to see more poems from you👍

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Sumit Chakrabarti 02 April 2016

Very Inspiring poem.Keep writting, keep us inspiring.

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Shrutika Kahale 04 April 2016

thankyou so much

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