Tuesday, September 16, 2008

All Those Nights, Legs Tangled Tight Comments

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I lay chided by the wind,
Waiting for your hold.
The stars of your eyes are distant,
Tonight their light is cold.
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Iohannes Silvaticus
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Ben Gieske 16 April 2009

I really like your metaphors and the way you weave similar ones throughout the poem. Your words are well chosen and convey a lot of meaning. Very satisfying and touching.

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C. P. Sharma 03 November 2008

It leaves behind a sensuousness of Keats' 'Eve of St. Agnes'.

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