All Things Lovely Comments

Her love so bountiful with muse of creation. Nice work.

i love this poem. very good read.

You are like a friendly spider spinning a web of loveliness...sunshine tears and patience all wrapped in love with a message keep it up...regards

sweet poem... like the smell of morning roses

I dont like the way this poems lays out on paper. It is to refined and not enough raw emotion either. On the good side, there it is nice that the author characterizes the virtues with identities to make them appear as if they are alive.

This is a supremely lovely poem, which affirms the better part of our human nature in celebrating five blessed things: sunshine, friendship, a gentle tear, i.e. sympathy, patience and time. I was surprised to see time so prominently placed. Many lyric poets consider time the enemy of all lovely things because it places a limit on their freshness and allure. But you persuasively list three blessings of time, including SHE ALLOWS FRIENDSHIP TO CRYSTALLIZE INTO/EXCELLENCE (wonderful!) , and have convinced me of a whole new outlook on that WINGED CHARIOT HURRYING NEAR.

Next in line is patience........to she removes evil from the tongue... a beautiful description of poem lines. So much hopes on life it gives and beautiful creativity and word power and so liked very much.

wonderful. lovely web of words. liked it a lot. :)

Subtle thoughts so well portrayed. Top marks, Leslie: -)

...She allows friendship to crystallize / Into excellence. She replaces sorrow / With the hope of a better tomorrow... Nice writing fit for PH.

Absolutely so well put together and lovely to read, thank you.

Oh my goodness.... I love this poem. =) You expressed it so well and it's just beautiful. Wow! Great work girl. =) Be blessed, Melanie

the author is right...all things are lovely.. patience is the most essential equalizer of all kinds of relationship.. the poem is nicely done..the words are well expressed..so nice..this will go to my fav..

Catering imagery / theme thro’ words are unique… and you too do so…Les… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

beautifully done, truely have a talent!

a thought provoking poem...even in the title there ia lovely poetry...which set a music going along the poem...this poem is not over it should go on

Really a very good thought provoking poem.

very thoughtful, bringing me into a stern mood when reading it.. great piece..

full of wisdom, i like it well penned.

i really love it =]