All these questions end with why
How much longer do I have to wait to die?
Asked yourself why didn’t you cry
Last thing I want to say is goodbye
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You are young and your poem is very good. You have a knack at writing. Why do you want to die?
Don't die- your poetry is full of emotion and life! Keep up the good work :)
to me, your references to self-mutilation and suicide do not necessarily pertain to you. in my opinion, you were describing the feeling of hopelessness in an ambiguous way. but i may be completely off. that's just what i took from this poem.