All These Belong Comments

A lovely flow to this poem, great write. Andrew x

Breathtaking! Really beautiful... thank you! Seat wishes Cecil

But they slip through your hands like sand! ! Good and gentle write.

Hmm. I thought the torment of pain was the most unusual item - everything else seems to have either a neutral or positive connotation. But I liked the flow. -chuck

I like this a lot, but dare I say that a 'cluster' of showers seems a tiny bit odd to me? I feel really mean saying so after everyone else's enthusiastic comments, and criticizing one single word (I cannot criticize the rest) , but that was my reaction. Nevertheless it is a beautiful poem and flows seemingly effortlessly. Well done.

Beautiful images, Ernestine and the short lines add to the simplicity. Raynette

A beautiful poem filled with contentment and inner peace. Warm regards, Sandra

Light that beams upon 'All These Belong'. This is an affirmation of why we exists to witness such experiences. Nice poem, Ernestine. VERY very nice! L

Yes the path is full of different emotions and there are some huge bolders in the way, I hope that you can find the best way through them, Love to you and your family, Love Duncan

I loved the flow and the rhythm of this, so visual and so true. Kind regards, Justine.