Thursday, November 4, 2010

All The While Comments

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I walk around this town
Knowing your not here
And all the while I am wishing
That you were still near
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Kelli D. Williams
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Lynn Glover 03 December 2010

A very beautiful love poem, heartbreaking, but a situation that is sure to heal with time. You're young and have plenty going for you. Good luck and a good write.

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Afzal Shauq 04 November 2010

thanks for sharing thsi sweet poem which has done so professionally and written in a very poetic way with heart touching expression and idea is also rich..10/10

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