Sunday, July 11, 2010
All The Stars Comments
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If all the tears were all the stars
that shine up in the sky
then all sad thoughts would be like clouds
slowly floating by
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8/26/2025 1:37:25 PM # 1.0.0
if every dropp of water was my open heart to see all the world would be right before your eyes. Interesting poem. you ought to count the syllables in your lines and get a stronger cadence going. And shifting it 8 followed by 10 would actually give you more of a ballad form to the poem. Just a thought. A poet friend RH Peat