Tuesday, May 24, 2011

All The Mistakes (One Life Can Take) Comments

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You wouldn't imagine they flash this bright
I raise an arm to my brow again.
But barely do they bring the least delight
They stab your bones till U feel the pain
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Kendzi Samuel
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Kendzi Samuel 23 June 2011

The title is lifted from the song 'So far away' by three doors down. 'when the waves break...', refers to d act of surfin. I wrote it at a time when I was, ... Well, I think d attitude in d poem is quite obvious. Hope U enjoyed it.

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