Saturday, January 22, 2005

All The Light You Can Comments

Rating: 4.5

Strike a match and light your sky
And stars will swirl like sparklers
Cart wheeling towards a black hole
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Tim Gavin
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Kathleen Paul-Flanagan 14 July 2005

What a great poem! I really liked this. One thought I had...as an aside...because it doesn't really matter that much...Cart wheeling...should that be one word? But it's beautiful. I really liked it.

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Raynette Eitel 21 June 2005

This is simply wonderful. Each time I read it, I see something new. Raynette

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