Tuesday, March 7, 2006

All The Hollow Silences Comments

Rating: 4.0

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First note sounds.
flooded silence in this cold, empty city
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Perfection Is Flawed
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Kelly Mcclure 25 June 2008

I like the imagery in this, you have a way with words

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Angela Healy 16 March 2006

the fading silence is so Hollow it hurts. great line, great poem too. you described not only what was seen but what was heard

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