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Great poem Dee Dee! Clever, fun and some very smart usage of the word 'it'! ! Also loved the candy floss line, imagery superb in this one. Well Done you! HG: -) xx

holds the attention. funny, i thought virginity in the first stanza

Well, now! What a ride! You have shown teen-age desire for freedom, the rebellion of the bottled blond...the wild abandon of the ride...Well done!

ooo la la liked this, great opening lines with the use of 'it' enjoyed the read smiffy