Wednesday, October 28, 2009

All The Demons And Ghosts Comments

Rating: 3.6

You have stolen my 'todays', yet you shan't steal my tomorrow-
Thought upon your deceitful ruse surely hastens sorrow!
Nary shall there be, for you, a proper penance,
Somehow though, you must come to truth's acceptance!
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Maurice Harris
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 13 December 2014

An awesome poem and it is having good thoughts.

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Rajnish Manga 13 December 2014

I wish I could write a similar poem myself. The following lines, in particular, steal the show The only way to take leave of your deceit- Is to allow for my truth to defeat, All the Demons and Ghosts Responsible for your shame, the most!

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Lyn Paul 13 December 2013

Your strength is powerful being able to continue you on with your tomorrows. Thank You

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Leslie Philibert 13 December 2013

Good write, like the thoughts..........

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Matthew Richmond 13 December 2012

Hit me between the eyes. Very nice.

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Babatunde Aremu 13 December 2012

Our tomorrow is secured on the platform of truth. Great job. I like it

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Kelvin Owusu 13 December 2012

this is a nice poem and an enjoyable read good job

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Maurice Harris

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