Saturday, May 10, 2014

All The Dead Day Long Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay cold and pale
In a casket made of wood
Six foot hole awaits
In a world where I once stood.
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Robert Green
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Valerie Dohren 29 July 2014

A fascinating and unusual poem Robert. Red shoes for a funeral - very poignant.

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Poetheart Morgan 03 July 2014

What can i say Poet.....is a stunning beauty.... She walks in Red shoes...Still? ? ? ?

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Shahzia Batool 15 May 2014

Very graphic, very sad...soulfully composed poem with visual images! ! !

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Laurie X3 14 May 2014

Wow......what a picture this paints.....and it leaves me wondering exactly what their relationship was.

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