Saturday, August 23, 2008

All The Boys Comments

Rating: 5.0

On back a bedroom door
A hook, a cap, untouched
This many year. The head
That wore it laughing
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Martin Swords
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Fay Slimm 29 November 2008

This short but so strong a verse brought lump to my throat and ache to my heart. - - Oh Martin, what have we done to these laughing boys.......... I feel, these days, a true communal guilt over these lost lives.... a poignant and moving write. - - Fay.

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Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

Short just impactful. Enjoyable read. thanks.

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Adeline Foster 27 August 2008

Right, that's a good one. Gets a 10 Adeline

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Colin Jeffery 25 August 2008

This took my breath away - a great war poem.

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Martin Swords

Martin Swords

Tiglin, Wicklow, Ireland
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