Thursday, March 26, 2015

All The Best Comments

Rating: 4.9

In the heat strokes and in the burning sun,
To defend young ones from the hunter’s gun,
Collecting straws a lengthy fatigue,
What we throw as waste, in fact an antique,
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Khalida Bano Ali 29 September 2019

An amazing poem, all the best for the poet.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2015

Hopes of future, the pleasant springs, I see more colors of the mighty wings... beautiful imagination...10

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Bisma Mirza 27 March 2015

Wow....... Wonderful poem.. Great! ! 10 on 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2015

Fantastic narration, beautifully envisioned. Many thanks.....10

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Khalid Saifullah 27 March 2015

A heart touching sweet melody...........................10

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Nee hatchlings have no credible defense against the elements of nature and creature...Yet in time, they learn survival better than we, and ostensibly know how to enjoy and safeguard their freedom....better than we! Impressive penning, A.J. ~FjR~

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Valsa George 27 March 2015

New lives are hatched in the nest under the loving and prudent care of the mother! Let them fly aloft and conquer new horizons! I too join you in wishing 'All the Best... All the Best! ' Lovely song!

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