Sunday, May 23, 2010

All That We Could Be Comments

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If only you knew what you mean to me..
If only you opened your eyes
Then maybe you would see all we could be
We could be forever,
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Marrissia Holliday
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Daniel Leddy 20 June 2010

That Is really beautiful Marrissia. If only you hadn't had to write this.

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Adam Reed 01 June 2010

whoa dude...goosebumps. lol i teared up. not gonna lie im a little on the sensitive side when it comes to emotions..

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I really like this, but it is quite sad. I know what this kinda thing feels like. It's really odd, I was listening to pictures of you by the last goodbye while I was reading your poem and the last line of your poem says dream of all we could be and the last line of the song is remind us all of what we could have been. Anyway, awesome poem, sorry for the long comment.

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