Thursday, January 16, 2014

All That's Measured Comments

Rating: 4.9

Let go of all that binds your heart
Unveil your eyes from clouded sight
Release your mind from tethered thoughts
Then fly in freedom through the night
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Valerie Dohren
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Robert Beck 08 October 2014

Treasured thought went into this great poem

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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Valerie Amazing poetry here keep on writing

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

I love this piece of work. Very good, and thought-provoking.

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Dan Reynolds 29 January 2014

I see the comparison. Nice tight writing Valerie.

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John Brown 26 January 2014

I'm never disappointed when reading your poems Val. Excellent.

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Amitava Sur 25 January 2014

Very well written, richness and plenty do not always satisfy, for that you need something which is very close to heart & soul. And again very true that aspiring beyond does never beget that...... very nice. You may read my poem My quest and my dream. and The power of truth

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2014

Seek not for all you cannot get Formulas for a contented life delivered nicely. Thank you.

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James George 23 January 2014

Excellent and the message is beautiful too. Being covetous is a modern disease. I like your style of writing

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Kanav Justa 21 January 2014

... sometitimes small things gives us more joy than bigger ones, , , its just how do we look into our lives, , , , beautiful write, ,

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Om Chawla 21 January 2014

A measure of realistically achievable aspirations lend more freedom of action as against striving for what is beyond one's grasp. Greed for more is self defeating and never gives contentment. Message beautifully conveyed, Val.

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Payal Parande 17 January 2014

i agree one do not need high expectation or rich life to be the winner all one need is love hope and satisfaction to whatever one has to face, bravo ma'am again you made me spell bounded love payal

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Kavya . 17 January 2014

a lovely poem Val......our life would have been glorious if we adhere to these simple living by not keeping much expectations..........wonderful lines...........worth applying to our life

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Savita Tyagi 16 January 2014

All that is measured you have grasped. Words worth remembering and repeating. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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