Tuesday, July 24, 2018

All That's Left Comments

Rating: 5.0

All that's left is one slice of cake
Upon the plate, to commemorate
Another year gone by, so fast
Another birthday now is past.
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Edward Kofi Louis 19 October 2019

Fast, past, mast, cast, last! Waiting for another time. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 19 October 2019

There will be another one next year. Birthdays are a good excuse/reason to eat cake! Thanks for reading, Edward Kofi! : -)

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Aqua Flower 28 July 2018

This is very good. I remember after a party, I would feel this way. The climax of it all over, and now this is what's left! Magnificently presented in this short and very relatable poem! .

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Many thanks, Aqua, to your tender heart, which always understands! :)

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