Friday, February 15, 2008

All That's Here Comments

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The sun descends in the evening,
And carries us into a new threshold,
Leaving the dimmer self behind;
The moon, a candle for the vigilant mind.
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Duy Bui
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Aaron Eliad 19 February 2008

The last line was excellent, and I thought that the poem depicted very well how linear that time is on earth. Good work.

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Duy Bui

Duy Bui

Portsmouth NH
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