All that Remains of Me
All that remains of me
Will be nothing less of a man
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/thoughts of passion are evidenced in your poem. Wonderfully penned. Congratulations on POD and thank you for sharing. : -)
CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen twice as The member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! For you, dear poet! An amazing ardent art. I have enjoyed very much. Twice won this most deserving poem.
stay calm until the last breath of air escape my fatigue body// ow the love stays peacefully here beautiful poem penned and shared
Love! ! Who will be there for me? True love is the Key; Night and day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
More powerful than the destructive power of Armageddon, is love breathed in a gentle humming. What a beautiful, powerful and gentle poem.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. A passionate piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Benjamin.
Fragile in the unweavering gaze of your caring eyes. Apalpable breathing body you can still touch and kiss and thank the Gods it was a just a bad dream superb write superb 10++++++++++++++++++++++++
Deep love is dripping non stop from the lines. As one goes on reading one gets more and more involved with the lines. Awesome drop. Deserved to be poem of the day. Congrats. 'Fragile in the unweavering gaze of your caring eyes. Apalpable breathing body you can still touch and kiss and thank the Gods it was a just a bad dream.' is so nice and touching.
Hi Ben, Congratulations on selection as Poet of the Day. Marvellous work Keep it up.
gratefull for the honor kind muse, will try my best on this regard, thank you respectfully
thank you for the honor of selecting my poem i am in great gratitude for this support, yours benjamin
(part-2) Let me quote- - And stay calm until the last breath of air escape my fatigue body. Fragile in the unweavering gaze of your caring eyes. Apalpable breathing body you can still touch and kiss and thank the Gods it was a just a bad dream A preciousremainder of how sad it will be if there was not a You - - - - - - - - - - Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.
thank you poet, cant express enought gratitude for your support great honor for your comments.
Maybe if the world would suffer on a major earthwake tommorow, We would come unscaped among the wreakages As if nature would not provoke these scenarious, As ifi would rather die in your arms and ignore all the possibilities of an Armagedon, And stay calm until the last breath of air escape my fatigue body. - - - - -wow- - Such a beautiful poem on power of love. The last few line takes away my breath- - -
Will be nothing less than a man! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem of love and the emotions it bestows upon those involved? .......well penned Benjamin
Love sometimes invoke fatalism thank you for your keen observations
A great poem of love between the two. Very delicately penned.
'A preciousremainder of how sad it will be if there was not a You' Love is so precious- -It is fulfilling.It is no life if there is no love. Congratulations again for this poem being chosen as the Poem of the Day!