Saturday, November 19, 2005

All That Jazz Comments

Rating: 5.0

I still taste wine on my breath
it’s sour now
not the sweet bliss
it was yesterday
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Jon Edward Walker
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Joy Vanderhelm 18 January 2006

That last line just clinched it. And, it's subtle, too. A great one, definitely.

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 07 December 2005

so far, this is your best one that i have read. the regretful irony in that last bit is what did it for me. Jake

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