ALL THAT IS........WAS
And so it was
All things that are
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Robert all things are and always have been and God indeed sees it all. So well put
I like this poem. It has a flow that runs beginning to end. I also like the expression of the thoughts and theories.. It's unemotional and hard hitting. I don't give marks (I'm not a teacher) , but this would be 10.78 recurring. Kind Regards Steve
Personally my beliefs are not with yours however I thought it was lovely
Free from desires and wants we can all be free, life is now, not yesterday and tomorrow hasn't happened. Life is really just a moving picture show. 10.