Saturday, February 21, 2009

All That Is....Was Comments

Rating: 4.3

ALL THAT IS........WAS

And so it was
All things that are
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robert delucchi
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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

Free from desires and wants we can all be free, life is now, not yesterday and tomorrow hasn't happened. Life is really just a moving picture show. 10.

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Alf Hutchison 05 April 2009

Robert all things are and always have been and God indeed sees it all. So well put

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Ron Flowers 05 April 2009

A very good poem, Robert. Ron

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Stephen Stirk 10 March 2009

I like this poem. It has a flow that runs beginning to end. I also like the expression of the thoughts and theories.. It's unemotional and hard hitting. I don't give marks (I'm not a teacher) , but this would be 10.78 recurring. Kind Regards Steve

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Ana Guerrero 07 March 2009

Personally my beliefs are not with yours however I thought it was lovely

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