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so i wipe away my tears and put away the pain thru love- i have so much to gain.... put away the pain and donot cry.. it will put u in shame... very good write.... i like it read mine'cry not' and how are u along with miss i miss u

getting back on track..we do have a lot to cry for..a lovely piece...read my 'losing a baby'

Your poem projects a valuable lesson on 'Contentment' which we all need to learn. The pathos surrounding it is very touching. The structured style of the poem is one that I have been championing for over a score of years now, vers libre not being my cup of tea. Congrats and a ten for you

how sad this one is.......

ahhhhh this is a good one krista