Sunday, October 19, 2014

All That Glitters Is Not Gold Comments

Rating: 4.9

Imitating innocence with the essence to fool,
If, known to you, disclose not; be calm n cool,
Their number is quite high, virtuous soup lapped,
Be ignorant of their act, thus they are self slapped,
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Aftab Alam
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Patricia Grantham 20 October 2014

Deception can be found even in the most so called beauty of a thing. Always good to look before you leap. Very good advice.

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Sallam Yassin 20 October 2014

yes that is the true, brother and the must important battle of goodness is to kill the beast inside us so that will make the number of wolfs decline in us and thanks again for your good stand for yours and for mankind may Allah subhanahu wa ta'ala bless you

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

A valuable advice in a great poem, I shall follow it in future. Thanks.

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 20 October 2014

It has a philosophic depth.It as well is soul probing.It well crafted.The melody is also nice. Keep up the good job.We have a lot to learn from you

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Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2014

Straightforward and honest depiction of some who are full of themselves and wanting to have everything, to the detriment of others. Seeing through their illusions and beneath their masks, watching your own back all the while. An excellent poem about the evils of some men, Aftab. A very good message you have written in this poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 October 2014

a strong poem written strongly. liked.

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