She stands there with her mistifying beauty
With her perfect arm reached out towards me
But something told me to stray away
I fought with all my might not to stay
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Instinctive ‘Ping’ was alarm…well instinct works and helps better …[may be] God sent the ‘Ping’ or your inner vibe spoke like that…its like narrative poetry…wonderfully crafted… Finally [conversely] it can be said ‘All gold does not glitter’…me a woman so I used the metaphor gold to indicate women… thanks for sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
My body is still here, but now she owns me My soul is lost, gone for eternity I fell for her illusion, and now it's to late, , , , very nive but realized very late in life..better late than never, v. good lesson in life......10