Friday, October 12, 2007

All That Glitters Is Not Gold? Comments

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He reached out to touch the faded bloom
as it fought to steal itself from the winter's gloom.
The weak sun burst through gaps in indigo clouds
threatening to clap with shaking sounds.
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David Taylor
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x... x... 12 October 2007

Excellent use of descriptives in this wonderful poem of yours...NO, all that Glitters is not gold contrary to what many percieve as success in life.....Love is needed in the mix as well especially if you have more than others to share.. No matter what's hidden in our deeds and actions if good, it does glitter in the ones whose eyes it should.............marci. :)

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