Tuesday, July 28, 2015

All That Around Me Comments

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I watch the sun fall aback
and rising white patch
amidst dark lands..
I hear the thunder
...
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Achintya trivedi
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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

Really fantastic imagery, could feel and see everything you described so eloquently in this poem. Could feel the verge of two worlds, enjoying their differences altogether. Great poem Achintya! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Lakhimpur kheri, UP, India
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