Wednesday, October 21, 2009

All Seeing Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes see straight through
Through the lies and deceit
Deceit that destroys
Destroys and corrupts
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Benjamin Turner
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Iron Panda 23™ 28 April 2010

what izzey said (:

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babs mcclenaghan 23 February 2010

yr poem catches the soul and makes you think hard brilliant poem

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Nice word play. I like what I hear, when I read it out loud. Good job.

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