Monday, September 29, 2008

All's Well Comments

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The red dress hung from a hanger on the door.
A garment that she had never worn before.
Its vibrant rich colour called to her to buy,
But why?
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Ernestine Northover
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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 October 2008

this reads like a fairy tale ernest. keep on.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 September 2008

Ernestine, sometimes simplicity when created by an Imagist such as yourself, can produce defining impact. And that is exactly what you've accomplished here(the key word here is ''Accomplished''') , in this fine effort, and results, of the same. ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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David Threadgold 29 September 2008

Hi Ernestine. A wonderfully descriptive view of a lady in red on a special date which went well. nice one this. Regards Dave T.

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David Taylor 29 September 2008

Your poem read, is red it seems. Dear Ernestine, your spell works well indeed. Love from David

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