All Rise Comments

Inspiring and motivating, just to sum up in two words.

I agree with Nosheen's comment about the flowing, gradually unfolding truth of your poem. It is persuasive in a quiet way, it shows that the ancient wisdom about living a good life is still the most reliable guide in thriving body and soul. This poem is a lullaby for adults. It quiets the inner turmoil and prepares the reader for life's next challenge.

Very inspirational work. I endorse every verse of this poem. The smooth flow of thoughts n words make it a very pleasing read. Thanku for this great message.10 definitely.

Time throws us again again in this technological world to meet challenges. Treating others respectfully with love and caring matters a lot. Interesting sharing.10

Peace and love! To treat others respectfully. Nice work.