Sunday, February 1, 2009

All Power Comments

Rating: 2.8

If I could take the world
into my world;
If I could be God-like
what would I do
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Lonnie Hicks
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Roseann Shawiak 04 February 2016

Great circular pattern, questioning, answering, then thinking of more questions, very introspective and insightful inquiries throughout this poem. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 October 2015

Verily, a self realization approach Loved reading it..........10 I invite you to read my poems

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 February 2009

wonderful and introspective across the humanistic philosophy that awes.........., thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 05 February 2009

Great poetry and a very good churning up of the soul. I loved it. CP

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Daniel Wheeler 01 February 2009

dude not bad. totally rated it a 10.

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