In the land
Of make believe and paradise,
Time does not pass by
We always feel
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Before reading this poem of yours, I have just read and commented on 'It Is As Good As It Ever Will Be - Poem by Shalom Freedman'. I can relate myself to both these poems. 'And in our human ignorance We realize not, That all our yesterdays Are our todays That won't come back.' - Sadly, so true!
In the land of make believe All are yesterdays come back again I’m a believer and I believe Our clock will rewind and remove the pain Nice write, Sandra.
Sandra, a very well written poem. Dreams pass by but we are immersed. Whereas today, never comes back.
Amazingly penned poem, dear Ma’am Sandra...10++