Monday, May 15, 2017

All Of You Comments

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If you walk away,
My heart calling to you
Will bring you back.
And you won't go far
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2020

So, do what you must do But when you're back, I want all of you. expression of intense desire..... i want all of you. tony

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Michael Walker 20 November 2017

A resonant line indeed: ' I want all of you'. I hope that the man walked right back to you after thinking about it.

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Practicing Poetess 21 November 2017

Ha-ha! Totally fictitious poem, Michael, as are so many of my love poems. But I do possess enough insight into men that I know that they require frequent periods of 'breathing space.' The subjects of this poem could possibly have just had a minor tiff. In any case, the woman is wise enough to realize that working things out includes allowing a man to 'do what he must do.'

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Rajnish Manga 15 May 2017

Wonderful poem of love and longing. Thanks for sharing. My heart calling to you Will bring you back. That our love will endure

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Thank-you, Rajnish! Thank you for reading, and for your positive comments and insights! :)

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