All Of My Dreams Are In Paper. (Song) Comments

Hello Colette: Your poem voices the same appeal of nine-tenths of the young people on this site. When you say: I know I am different from the rest of the world. Actually you are experiencing the same depth of lonelyness of those of your age. In your poetry, I see promise and structure, so in that way you are different from the rest of the youths around you. In your attention to spelling and grammar, you show a training that is sadly lacking in the majority of those who aspire as poets on this site. I would like to see you branch out of self-absorption and turn your talents onto other subjects. your poetry will gain greater depth and you will find alleviation for the insecurity you feel. Adeline Adeline