Sunday, January 8, 2017

All Of A Sudden (Translation) Comments

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We have to stop laughters and keep silence all of a sudden. We have to display a smile on our lips but weep at heart.

We were laughing at a joker named Inam in our wise heart, we have to wash the same(heart) with tears all of a sudden now.
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Jazib Kamalvi
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Mamunur Rahman Kayes 30 November 2019

O poet(Jazib) , we have been understanding your game since a long time. You have to become cursive writer again which is an old game for you......very strong feelings love it

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 December 2019

Dear Mamunur Rahman! Thank you so much for your words.

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Shaojun Li 19 May 2019

I wish I can read the original. Poetry writing itself is a profound metaphor. Thank you for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 May 2019

Thank you, Shaojun Li, for your nice wish.

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Aryan Nuwal 11 December 2018

you just gave me some idea, nice poem, thanks for viewing my blog

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 December 2018

Thanks for the nice comment, Aryan Nuwal.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

We have to stop laughters and keep silence all of a sudden. We have to display a smile on our lips but weep at heart…….An adorable write! Thanks for sharing....10

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 January 2018

Many thanks, Dr. D. K. S, for your nice words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2017

This is really a beautiful poem with eloquency of depiction that was sung at the farwel of Mr. Iqbal. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2017

Bundle of thanks, sir, Mahakul.

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Unwritten Soul 05 August 2017

I noticed most of your poems were born for some event/farewell party...This actually a sweet gesture from you to everybody :) and the words you gave is pristine, beautifully done :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2017

Of course, all the poems are recited in different events. I am grateful for such nice poetic comments.

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2017

A well composed and nicely drafted piece. Thanks for sharing Jazib.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 June 2017

So nice of you Dike.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2017

Ek bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal.....................................

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Shukria, Akhtar sb..

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