Sunday, June 19, 2016

All Of A Sudden Comments

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Thoughts normally crosses my mind often,
why got stuck, all of a sudden?

Fragrance normally spreads in the air,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 19 July 2020

Wonderful poem, all of a sudden it makes sense to me.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Roaming all alone! With the muse of your mind. Nice work.

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Daniel Brick 24 June 2016

I like the way you connect many things under the rubric of ALL OF A SUDDEN, the whole poem shows how life is bound to surprise us, however much we think we can predict it. The closing lines offer some comic relief after LOVE barges into the poem disrupting the serenity of life with its turbulent joys. Oh, yes we want that to happen!

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T Rajan Evol 22 June 2016

Wow most of the things happens in this world all of a sudden...

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Kelly Kurt 19 June 2016

It does seem that things that change your life happen all too suddenly

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